Writing - Hansel & Gretel Plot 2

Hello everybody this is my writing blog for the week!

I have split the google drawing in half because I thought it would be easier to read that way.

Anyways this is my second part of the Hansel and Gretel story, I have tried to use some interesting vocabulary such as: 

"The room was giving me sour vibes."

Or

"Melting marshmallows."

What do you think will happen next?

Writing Task - Hansel & Gretel

Kia ora, thanks for checking out my blog.

For my first writing task for this term we have been rewriting the start of the book Hansel & Gretel. We also have been focusing on the Fantastic's just like my reading.

We looked at a few different writing methods such as repetition for effect, adjectives and similes. We have also been making sentences that have things to do with tasting and smelling (basically all the senses).

Finished Task:

How would you describe the taste of your favourite lolly?