Writing Task - Hansel & Gretel

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For my first writing task for this term we have been rewriting the start of the book Hansel & Gretel. We also have been focusing on the Fantastic's just like my reading.

We looked at a few different writing methods such as repetition for effect, adjectives and similes. We have also been making sentences that have things to do with tasting and smelling (basically all the senses).

Finished Task:

How would you describe the taste of your favourite lolly?

Reading Task - Fantastics

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For the first week of this term we have been learning about the fantastic's. It's basically what you would look for in books and your own writing.
They make you more aware about the senses and things while your writing a story.

For this task we had a slide with the story of little red riding hood and we had to find sentences that included the fantastic's such as:

With a smile and a swing of her cape. She skipped energetically through the dense undergrowth of the woodland.

That sentence is an action





Then we had to use other stories and do the same thing, here are the sentences that I picked up:

Do you think you can make up a sentence that includes the fantastic Imagining?