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Monday 3 August 2020

Writing - Hansel & Gretel Plot 2

Hello everybody this is my writing blog for the week!

I have split the google drawing in half because I thought it would be easier to read that way.
Anyways this is my second part of the Hansel and Gretel story, I have tried to use some interesting vocabulary such as: 

"The room was giving me sour vibes."
Or
"Melting marshmallows."




What do you think will happen next?

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